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I had a dream last night.
It was quite the dissapointment to wake up
and leave all my happy thoughts
stranded on my empty pillow.
Out of dream world and into reality,
my stomach growls for food,
so into the kitchen I go,
starving.
I miss my dreams.
They're so sweet,
I'm addicted.
A user with no volition.
The disappointment when you wake
after leaving such a beautiful delusion
is overwhelming.
Lost in despondency,
food means little.
The kitchen is just another prison,
and I'm seeking an escape
back to dreamland.
I miss my dreams.
They're so sweet,
I'm addicted.
A user with no volition.
Happy endings
are only existent
in somnambulist realities.....
Pierdo mis sueños.
Son tan dulces,
Soy adicto.
Un usario con ninguna volición.
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