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The Pedestal

You set me up this high


And my faults stand out


Like steaming bloody footprints


On marble, cold and white


 


You look at me


And see a goddess


Pale and perfect


You don't see the cracks in my façade


 


I look outwards


From myself


And the inside that I see


Feels ugly, ravaged, decimated


 


And I wonder,


When the marble cracks


And falls apart


And the core of me


 


The soul of me


Is exposed


Where will you


Be?


[laine.mindsay.com]

 
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